Thanks for the feedback Duvel (npub10ya…39j5)
One thought I had was putting plain language definitions at the beginning of each post. You will see this in later posts(much more to come) as the topics get more complex.
Unfortunately, I made an assumption that peer-to-peer was a straightforward enough expression. In case it wasn't , I added in my first paragraph, "...where you and another person can directly make transactions without needing a third party to oversee everything." I could have connected the two better.
With the word server, I assumed again that anyone reading the white paper would know what a server is. I wrote, "...a special server to keep track of when transactions happen. This server helps us prove the order of transactions through advanced computer work."
This is the good thing about posting all this here, more eyes on the content can make it better.
Please subscribe, and share with folks, thanks again.
Delta Charlie
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2024-01-13 15:54:21
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