#writerscoffeeclub Mar 14 — Should you avoid sentence fragments? Or, should you. Simply not care?
I'm really not a fan of overusing them. In direct speech, thoughts, or sparingly to emphasize something, that's all fine with me.
But when it's a regular occurrence like in each paragraph - it just pulls me out of the story, and I'm likely to stop reading.
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