Now let's talk about WRITING TROPES.
This is a good article. I don't know who wrote it, but my criticism is offered in the spirit of constructive collaboration, not dunking.
This clause:
"For the tribe, redwoods are considered living beings..."
ARE REDWOODS NOT LITERALLY SCIENTIFICALLY PROVEN TO BE LIVING BEINGS? DO WE NOT ALL AGREE ON THIS?
Why the mystic Indian bullshit? 🙃 🙃 🙃
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