Yesterday, all that changed; I used https://highlighter.com to format the true story below.
Fren, would you please help me by ***taking five minutes*** to ***read my story?***
I would ***tremendously*** appreciate your feedback, particularly:What follows is my best effort to recall the details of an arguably supernatural encounter I experienced almost sixty years ago. I’ve told this story many times before, and while my recollection may not be perfect in every detail, my account is real and substantively factual.
It was early one long ago morning, in that twilit between-time shortly before dawn. As I dangled precariously in a quasi-aware state, hovering on the knife edge between wakefulness and sleep, I was transported in a dream to another place and time. Was it the Mediterranean coast? Perhaps ancient Greece?
In my mind’s eye, I found myself climbing a rather steep, rocky hillside overlooking a sparkling bright blue sea. Ahead of me, and slightly higher, was what appeared to be a young shepherd boy, leading me ever higher up the hill.
As we wove our way upward,
skirting rocky outcroppings and zig-zagging because of the steepness of the slope, I heard the boy chanting:
“Ata, Ata, Archontos, Ata, Ata, Echousi, Ata, Ata, Archousi”
He kept repeating the mantra, over and over:
“Ata, Ata, Archontos, Ata, Ata, Echousi, Ata, Ata, Archousi”
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“Ata, Ata, Archontos, Ata, Ata, Echousi, Ata, Ata, Archousi”
I listened for a few cycles, and then took up the chant myself. After several attempts, when at last I got it right, the shepherd boy turned, looking back at me and smiling broadly to signal that I had finally mastered the cadence and the words.
Then I awoke.
Because my dream had been so vivid and unusual, I immediately found a pencil and paper to write down the chant phonetically before I could forget it.
A few days passed.
Life was busy. Then I remembered my friend in grad school, studying biblical Greek. That weekend, I went and hung out with him while he worked his night job at the college heating plant. Between his rounds inspecting and managing the steam boilers keeping students from freezing to death in the Arctic Midwest winter, I told him about my strange dream.
Pulling out an exhaustive Greek lexicon, one by one, my knowledgeable friend looked up the words from my dream, interpreting each according to its verb conjugation, tense, and mood.
“Ata, Ata” had no discernible meaning; we soon concluded that it was probably just meaningless vocables, added to give the chant rhythm and substance. My friend moved on to the first recognizable word of the chant…
“Archontos” - “They are ruled.”
OK, so far, so good. He checked the next word:
“Echousi” - “They shed blood.”
Hmmmm… This chant is beginning to appear to be more than random sounds.
“Archousi” - “They rule.”
At this point, I almost fell out of my chair in shock. Far from being a meaningless chant, this cycle—repeating again and again—is the seemingly never-ending story of the entirety of human history…
“They Are Ruled, They Shed Blood, They Rule.”
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“They Are Ruled, They Shed Blood, They Rule.”
This concise mantra perfectly captures the endlessly repeating cycle of oppression, revolt, and revolution that always leaves us with a fresh set of oppressors all too ready to replace the last.
Who will rescue us?
Who will redeem us from this endless tedious cycle into which we have been born?
A long lifetime of study and reflection has persuaded me that this deadly cycle can and ultimately will be broken. If we follow the teachings of Jesus; if we love one another and live together in voluntary, local societies, serving each other; I am persuaded that we can break free of this desperately destructive cycle of endlessly seeking to dominate one another. It’s past time for us to enter into a mutually beneficial life in the Kingdom of our Creator-God Jesus, the most authentically benevolent King the universe has ever known.
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