Someone elsewhere here mentioned critique partners and I was reminded of some of my WTF favorites including “You can’t have guns and swords in the same story.”
Another was a crit for The Kings Daughter where an editor told me “She can’t have gray eyes. In gaming, elves always have gray eyes”. There are no elves nor is there anything about gaming (other than chess) in that book.
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