Mark W White on Nostr: npub10n9kw…dtjug Never abandoned one yet, but I was struggling with my current WIP. ...
npub10n9kwhemskr7uzjrp7ltr4nj9j6fdl5vkv0u8vc56u9tsfwh84hsrdtjug (npub10n9…tjug) Never abandoned one yet, but I was struggling with my current WIP. Less about the first chapter itself, but how I couldn't justify where the story was going given the characters I'd introduced.
Ended up sending it to my author son for feedback. His astute criticism – and the time away – gave me the ammunition I needed to expand and rework it. Now I can see in unusual detail (for me) how the first half fits coherently together.
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2023-06-18 13:52:52Event JSON
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