I have just posted a scene from my WIP here: https://text.tchncs.de/marcr/an-unexpected-scenery
(I hope there are not too many translation errors in it.)
Any kind of feedback, especially regarding atmosphere or if you can visualise the scene, is highly appreciated.
And I take the liberty of waving in the direction of #FeedbackFriday and #WritingWonders 😉
Marc Riese /
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2023-06-16 00:06:21
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